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In a city of clanking pistons and hissing steam, where the sky was a permanent tapestry of grey smoke, Elara’s workshop was a sanctuary of intricate wonder. She was a tinkerer, an artist of gears and springs, and her greatest creation was a sparrow. Not a crude imitation, but a masterpiece of articulated brass and silver, with filigree feathers that caught the dim light. A tiny, polished ruby served as its heart, and when she wound the key in its side, it would hop, tilt its head, and sing a song of five perfect, crystalline notes. It was her companion in the lonely workshop, a creature of beautiful, predictable precision.

One afternoon, a storm raged over the city, a real one, not of steam but of rain and wind. A frantic tapping at her windowpane broke her concentration. There, drenched and trembling on the sill, was a real sparrow. One of its wings was bent at a sickening angle. It was a tiny, messy, terrified bundle of brown and grey feathers, its eyes wide with pain.

Elara’s heart, which understood the clean logic of mechanics, stumbled at the sight of this fragile, broken life. She carefully brought it inside, her large, capable hands surprisingly gentle. She fashioned a splint for its wing from a sliver of wood and a scrap of silk, and made a nest for it in a drawer lined with soft cloths. She offered it water from a dropper and seeds from her own meager supplies.

Her clockwork sparrow, perched on its usual brass branch, watched this all with unblinking sapphire eyes.

At first, Elara divided her attention equally. She would wind her mechanical bird and listen to its perfect song, then turn to tend to the real one, who accepted her care with quiet, trusting exhaustion. But as days turned into a week, the real sparrow, whom she had started to call Pip, began to heal. It started to chirp—a rough, unpredictable sound, full of life and demand. It would hop around its drawer, scattering seeds, leaving tiny droppings on the clean wood.

Elara found herself smiling at its messy vitality. The sound of its real chirp was more compelling than the most perfect melody from a gear.

She didn’t notice the change in her clockwork creation at first. It was subtle. A slight hesitation in its hop. A faint, discordant buzz that had crept into the third note of its song. She assumed a gear was out of alignment and made a note to service it later. Her focus was on Pip, who was now testing his mended wing, fluttering clumsily from the drawer to her workbench.

The clockwork sparrow watched this first, ungainly flight. And as Pip landed with a soft thump beside a set of calipers, the mechanical bird opened its beak. Instead of its programmed song, it let out a sharp, metallic screech.

Elara jumped, knocking over a tiny pot of screws. She stared at her creation. The sound had been pure noise, an angry, jagged thing. She reached for it, concerned. “What’s wrong, little one?”

The clockwork sparrow hopped back, away from her hand. Its sapphire eyes seemed to glow with a cold, new light.

The next day, it happened again. Pip was hopping across Elara’s schematics, chirping happily as she laughed. The clockwork sparrow, wound and perfect, was singing its five-note tune. Midway through, it stopped. Its head swiveled, its gaze fixing on the real bird. With a whirring of over-stressed springs, it launched itself from its branch.

It was not the graceful, swooping flight Elara had designed. It was a direct, aggressive dive, straight for Pip.

Pip squawked in alarm and fluttered away, a flurry of panicked feathers. The clockwork sparrow slammed into the parchment where he had just been, its metal claws scratching deep gouges into the paper. It lay there for a moment, gears whirring furiously, before righting itself. It did not return to its perch. It stood on the desk, its body angled toward Pip, a low, grinding hum emanating from its core.

A cold knot tightened in Elara’s stomach. This was no mechanical fault. This was jealousy. A terrible, impossible emotion born from the magic she had poured into its creation, now twisted into something dark.

She tried to separate them. She moved Pip’s nest to a high shelf and kept the clockwork sparrow on her desk. But the mechanical bird’s entire being was now focused on the real one. It would spend hours, its spring wound tight, staring up at the shelf. Its song ceased altogether, replaced by that menacing, idle hum. It began to pluck at its own brass feathers with its beak, leaving them bent and scarred.

One evening, Elara was cleaning Pip’s drawer. She had let the real sparrow perch on her shoulder, where it preened her hair, its tiny claws gentle on her skin. She heard a click. Then another.

She turned. The clockwork sparrow was on the floor. It had jumped from the desk. One of its delicate silver legs was bent from the impact, but it was still advancing, dragging its broken limb, its single-minded purpose more terrifying than any show of speed. Its beak was open, and a thin, high-pitched whine, like a boiling kettle, was building inside it.

Pip froze on her shoulder, his tiny body trembling.

Elara acted without thought. Her hand, the one that had built the beautiful, broken thing, shot out and snatched the clockwork sparrow from the floor. It struggled in her grasp, its gears grinding, its sharp beak pecking futilely at her thumb. The ruby that was its heart pulsed with a feverish, angry light.

She could have smashed it. It would have been the logical, safe thing to do. A broken tool, a malfunctioning creation.

But she didn’t. She saw the bent leg, the scarred feathers, and she didn’t see a monster. She saw a reflection of her own loneliness, given form in brass and silver. She had created it to be perfect and loved, and in doing so, had given it the capacity to feel the pain of being replaced.

Holding it firmly, she carried it to her workbench. Pip, sensing the danger had passed, let out a soft, questioning chirp from her shoulder.

With slow, deliberate movements, Elara took her smallest screwdriver. She didn’t repair the bent leg. Instead, she opened the small, intricately engraved door on the sparrow’s chest. She reached the central governor spring, the thing that regulated its actions. Gently, carefully, she adjusted the tension. She didn’t fix the jealousy; she couldn’t. But she could temper its expression.

She closed the hatch and set the bird down. It sat listlessly on the bench, its head drooping.

Then, she lifted Pip from her shoulder. She held her breath, her heart hammering. She brought the real, living sparrow close to the mechanical one.

The clockwork sparrow looked up. Its gears whirred, but softly now. It did not screech or attack. It tilted its head, and from its beak came a single, warbling note. It was not its old, perfect song. It was something new. Something sad, and complex, and strangely beautiful.

Pip, in her hand, chirped back.
A understanding, fragile and wordless, passed between the tinkerer, her creation, and the wild thing she had saved. The workshop was no longer a sanctuary for one perfect, lonely thing. It had become a home for three imperfect ones. And in the hissing quiet of the steam-city, a new, discordant, and living harmony began.

Bio:
Im a writer and amateur horologist based in the North of Nigeria .My stories often blend the mechanical and the magical, exploring the quiet dramas that unfold in small, hidden spaces. I  finds inspiration in the contrast between the ordered world of clockwork and the beautiful chaos of nature.
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